dude this is really good you HAVE to finish it! id even say its the most elaborated tune you ever did. everything is nice here, the mixdown is good, the arrangement is alright and the melodies and soundchioces are great. I had this on loop for like 10 minutes and if put it in another genre (no its not trance...) id would do BEAST in videogames or breaks :)
i did responded to this months ago! f you newgrounds!
I didnt know you could do crazy ass stuff like this >,< great quality, digging the tripple snares ;)
lol crazy ass stuff is practically my middle name, glad ya like it. Snare needs some more power though
very solid work man, you got your lyrics down on point and the beat is nice. but tbh I dont feel the energy in your beat, something is missing maybe its the thin snare or the subby kick. It needs some more punch you know? fatness, power, in your face feeling u know what I mean man. I'd have added something on top of that kick to give it the punch it needs. use one sample for the energy and one for the feeling, sub + punch thats the key. and maybe turn down the vox by 2-3db, I think its a bit too loud compared to the beat.
nothing wrong with your shit at all man I am just nitpicking (just my opinion u know) still good stuff here, keep it up
haha Thanks Aera and i can't even argue with ya bro cause I love your beats and ive written one of the sickest club songs ever to one of your beats it seriously could go mainstream and rocket off! I dont know what you named the beat but I titled the song "It's Lust" the only thing slowing me down is a need a good male singer to drop the hook that I have written for it, but thanks for the rate and review dude dont froget about your boys in AftyrLyfe and keep pumpin out those dope beats, peace!
... so far :) you left a comment on steakjohnsons track (I know him for a while now) you said you want him to come into msn and I got msn aswell and you seem to a decent producer so.... WANNA GIVE ME YOUR ADD?!!
also nice nice tune, a bit heavy on the low end but still nice. you still need to work on your mastering, the snare stays behind and as mentioned the kick has too much sub in it. also be careful with the pads, they tend to cause resonance issues if you play em too loud, pushing down the midsection of your master.
anyway send me a pm if you want to stay in touch
LOL I DELETED MY LAST RESPONSE
Havent heard your tunes for a long time, reminds me in race around the world :)
You always use weird melodies and synths. I think Quantum Leap's "East / West Gypsy" would be the best synth you could get for your tunes, check it out its amazing, trust me.
As an individual upload the song is ok but compared to your other songs you are getting to predictable (in my opinion). Also the mastering could use some work, for example: I find the snare doesnt stand out enough and the hihats are way too loud. Just my opinion, maybe you wanted it to be like that.
I still won't submit any of my regular work :D
then I won't submit any of my regular reviews :D
what comes to my mind
nice flutes, very emotional melodies, drums, ho cool pattern, didnt see that coming, snare sounds nice and fresh, awesome atmosphere, oh that synth sounds like a siren, stuttering synth, also very good choice, fits the mood very well and reminds me in mirrors edge which had similar effects, freat percussion in the background, the mastering sounds very clear to me, second verse, nice variations, the bass is fine but basic, maybe flesh out the sound a bit more next time, underwater atmosphere (wow whats your synthesizer for this tune?) I expect you use hypersonic for your melodies and atmosphere (?)
why do you never reply on my reviews and msgs, I thought you were still on ng man
Lyrical abomination who's gift can bomb a nation
holy shit spawn this is mad shit! I cant WAIT to hear more man, thrilled right now for the release. I can see you going far, get your shit together and drop us a killer album man! Also kudos to Yun, I guess hes on the beat aswell, the acid -ish bass sounds very much like him. Keep up the good music.
did I miss something?
gotta stop wasting time on NG...
whats up with dat?
Good production tho
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gotta do sumptn bout dis here, you got no reviews at all wtf
I like the composing and sound choices, easy on the strings and nice drumset. the sequencing is alright, simple but nothing wrong with that. Nice arrangement aswell and great length. There is room for some vocals and instrumental parts aswell. As I said nothing wrong with the composing, melodies and sequencing are fine. I only got problems with the mastering. The glass percussion is too loud and gets annoying in time, turn it down by like 3-5 db and it should be fine. The sub is too loud on certain notes, epecially the lowest parts. Its too oppressive and nearly drowns the other channels in my opinion. What kind of output do you use for your mixdown? Never use headphones for the sub, only use hifis if thats your only option and if you know exactly what your mix sounds like on other systems or propably get some monitors for the mids if you dont already have some.
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