Nice one
Although I'm more in DnB than Techno T thought I have to give you a review jst as you did ^^ Good Idea for the Track - but I think you should connect the voica more to the track itself and make it flow with the music not next to it. I missed some buildup and you should pick some better noticable drums ;) Keep working on your style, I started just about a half year and I'm not trying that stuff every day as you can guess ^^ Learning by doing works good in here...
WOW!
This would perfectly fit in a FF Render Scene ore some comparable Video Game :O You got much talent for orchestral epic music. It loops perfect and I love the Piano at the beginning, this will definitely go on my HDD and on my iPod. Big Ups for ya!
Thank you.
Good :D
You made something complete this time!! Cool you used the melody from your first collection, but as this is the best thing and the most calming sound it is bad that it just dissapears early and doesn't come back till the end. The track gets a little too heavy and crazy with the many repeating Bells and HiHats. But the liquid bass sequence later is pretty cool. Try to smooth out the ending and make it loop ;)
Yea i agree it does repeat alot i was just trying to make it longer bad idea i guess lol/ Thanks.
Deep as expected!
I like to compare between Remix and Original so it's good you hadn't deleted the older one. Well better HiHats and Strings, the whole thing seems to be less empty now... Only thing I found wierd was the plunky thing at the intro. It doesn't really leads in to the track itself. It just is there, lying aound doing his (unknown and badly payed) job waiting just to finally disappear @ 0: 48 - It doesn't come back later or smthng and it has no connection to the rest of the Track in my opinion, except the string sound underlayed ~.-
As for your Remixes themself try to do a little more "Remaking" then "Remixing". Add some new elements, change old ones and give it a new feeling without ripping it apart aompletely. This is some more higher technique and really needs expert knowledge to do ;) But you sure will get that tough one day I belive ^^
lol i think i can make the intro pattern work
its probly just the instrument i used (hypersonic pizzcato) thats makin ppl complain
ill probly upload an edited version in a week or so with a dif instrument
as for my remixes/remakes i could do more tweaking i suppose...
but really the only reason i even do remakes is because my tracks r usually done fairly quickly and r mastered pretty poorly (and i still suck at mastering even when i try lol)
i never really have a problem with my melodies or theyre arrangement... i just want to improve their sound quality.
K-Dm
WOW!
This Boss Theme totally K!CI<5 4S$ !!! I could loop this to dead while playing Golden Sun Boss Battles! I'm still hoping for GS3 one far day :,( If you know GS yu truly know what I mean, if not go get a GBA and buy GS 1+2 !!! You miss some epic storyline and absolutely absorbing gameplay! Same for Terranigma on SNES, I can send you some Tracks from it too :D Inspiration is everything!
To the Track: Very cool and heavy Battle feeling going around here, the guitars and the choir keep it on the line of kicking some badass boss's ass XD Very good brass work, loops pretty good too.
5/5
10/10
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i have played golden sun 1! but i did not finish it though. I did like the music and the battle themes :D
TERRANIGMA IS GREAT! I played that game so much when I was younger lol, aweosme <3
thank you for scores and review! and sure, gimme some tracks from games!
even if it doesn't ignite inspiration it's always nice to listen to classic vg music :)
Better
This is quite better then the older version. I can hear you lowered the drums and the violin doesn't sound so low quality this time. the Piano is much more clear... but you didn't change one thing... the melody is still great as before ;)
btw, I'm going to get FL8 next month or August maybe! *Yeha* Then we can get to the serious stuff, like my remix of your Song (I didn't forget)
hmmm im starting to think i may have lowered the drums a bit too much now... its hard to tell with headphones only lol
ill raise the drum volume up a bit again in a few min
thx for the review
and im looking forward to ur remix
K-Dm
LP!
I can hear a "little bit" Remember the Name in here ^^ Nice Remix/New Song w/e you wanna call it. It gets a bit repetitive after a while, but ass (whoops ^^) you said it's a beat to spit on, not a single Track as it is now! Still cool!
Still good
But not as awesome as your others :( what I find very sad... I waited ONE year for a new Track and now this. Its still a very good Track but hey, you are ParagonX9!!! Look at your older Tracks (No.5, Defection, Chaoz Fantasy)
I loved your Music because you had the most complexe beatparts behind your basslines. They were bursting out of drums, snares, hats etc. and they sounded very well placed and still not too disordered for all that stuff.
Your new Song has a very simple Beat now (which is not bad) but I expected something more here. Now let's get to the important things:
+ Bassline is good
+ Beat is simple but still fits god with the rest
+ Awesome synth starting at 0:44 (Reminds me of a cool Retro-Game I played)
(Negative is most personal...)
I expected something more... everything! More longer, more complex, more individual, more different... This is like a Concept and a Beat I faced with so often, it's not really comparable with your older style :( You have to put out something REALLY incredible to make me think different now!
Very cool
Awesome whales in the background :O Pretty calming melody with a smooth beat on it, you integrated the sonar very good and put some stereo effects on the Track (sounds good on home-system but bit distracting when you use only one earphone ^^ but you couldn't know that)
i don't use home systems (i hate 5.1 thingies the most), i have studio monitors and headphones, so ...
this is quite an old project, made when i was experimenting stereo extreme efects
thanx for review
Awesome melodys!
The electro melody (till 0:55) is awesome man :O Same with the following ambient stylish part, and the electro bassline after that one is just as good as the first one.
But... I said the MELODY was good, not the mixing, neither the eq'ing and less than ever the other samples (claps, snares) - clapping at 3:27 is very repetitive :/ Every part has much potential, but you need to fix some critic issues for sure. On the other way I'm going to buy FL8 too in a few months I guess. I only got Demo and I'm still using it now but I know not that much to tell you anything about issues and mistakes, mine has crappy parts too ^^
Be sure to check out my Tracks sometime, we should stay in touch not only cause the bassline and the dark drums in the first part are going to kill my mind as hell XD You MUST tell me how you made it sound like that, maybe its a very standard sytrus and I just didn't find it yet...
yea i only bought the express version of fl studios. On this track i used the toxic melodies changes them just a little made my own kick,snare and other instruments and mixed them in. My main purpose was just to throw like 3 or 4 melodies i liked and changed them a bit and wanted to see if any part was worth making a song. My main problem is on the express cheapest version there is a lot of content i cant access like fading editing or seeing the sound waves and adjusting them. Not until i buy the producer edition which is 150 bucks more. Im still learning alot its all kinda overwhelming lol. I appriciate the good review and if you want maybe we can throw some stuff together and make a good song :) I work alot so if you message me just give me some time i usually check NG almost everyday though.
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