Well well...
Good mix between Ambient and HipHop, but it sounds a bit repetitive after a while, especially at 1:25 . You should add some more noticeable instruments in my opinion. You got the will and you can create awesome melodys for sure, but you are always so reserved about adding some catchy sounds that could keep the track in my mind, making me listen to it all the way to work or the whole evening while surfing on web... And like flashmac said the drums sond a bit empty and petite (well if that's right ? nah, you know what I mean)
You made better stuff :/ And I don't see anything of my recommendations from last post, but I guess this track was already to complete for that. But, stay cool man :D I'm expecting great things from 'clouded conscience' - Sounds to get a rage, powerfull as-kickn beat from what I heard about...